Peter Pan - 95

December 23rd, 2012, 7:49 am

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TriaElf9,

December 23rd, 2012, 7:49 am

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I love that last line ^_^

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Onasaki,

December 23rd, 2012, 12:19 pm

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That is an awesome last line. Yes.

Essency,

December 23rd, 2012, 2:48 pm

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I've been enjoying this comic very much so far, but do you mind if I give you some well-intentioned critiques? This page, for example, makes it seem as if their parents were in the next room. I know they are in someone's else house but it's very unclear where Nana is running to or where the parents are.

Silly Guest Name (Guest),

December 23rd, 2012, 5:49 pm

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The only bad side of this page is that it's the start of one of the saddest subplots ever done: Mr. and Mrs. Darling coming back home, and discovering that their children are gone.
And it will take them WEEKS to come back. Just think how terrible this must be to a parent...

TriaElf9,

December 23rd, 2012, 6:17 pm

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@Essency: You make a very good point ^_^ I think it is a bit clearer if it were to be read all at once, rather than twice a week updates. Also, I have number 27 on the door, but it got covered ^_^;; I'll be redoing the page before I make the book, so I'll be sure to address this page. Thanks!

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